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Abram Newcomer's avatar

This is quite beautiful. I love the stanza form used (4-3-4-3::4-4-4-3); the meter sets up the trimeter refrains so wonderfully!

It also reminds me of Ps 107, which contains a portrait of 4 types of people (you have 3 here) who, in their distresses, are delivered by God. Thank you for sharing.

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Kate Bluett's avatar

Thank you so much!

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Robert Charboneau's avatar

Beautiful work Kate

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Kate Bluett's avatar

Thank you so much!

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Stephen Weller's avatar

love it!

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Kate Bluett's avatar

Thank you!

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