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Thomas DeFreitas's avatar

Identifying! And wowzers, bravissima.

Kate Bluett's avatar

Thank you so much! And yes, I thought maybe people could relate.

Amy Kumar's avatar

Wow! This is beautiful and I feel it so deeply 🥹

Kate Bluett's avatar

Thank you!

E. K. Galle's avatar

Ah, so relatable…

Megan Willome's avatar

Your poem reminds me of a line in "Kristin Lavransdatter," something like, Lord, I only want this and this and this, and then this and this and this.

Kate Bluett's avatar

I haven't read KL in almost twenty years. I should revisit it, but I was kind of traumatized the first time through.

Megan Willome's avatar

I am so sorry it hit you that way. It grabbed my heart in 2019 and has never let me go. It's my heart book. I can't even count how many times I've read it.

Kate Bluett's avatar

I made the mistake of reading it during my first pregnancy. The scene with Kristin's first labor is just so much, and I had a very long and difficult labor with my first. I'm a little afraid that rereading it would be a lot to deal with. But it is an amazing book!

Megan Willome's avatar

That is totally fair. It is one of the most harrowing birthing scenes I've ever encountered.

Patrick Kocher's avatar

I love how the ancient prayer that seems stale and dry in the opening line reappears with sincerity at the end.

Kate Bluett's avatar

Thank you. The opening to do that surprised me when it showed up.

Patrick Kocher's avatar

Oh, this is good.

Kate Bluett's avatar

Thank you!

Kaylene Johnson-Sullivan's avatar

So beautiful. Thank you.

Blue-Collar Theology's avatar

Excellent as always, Kate! Thanks for sharing. A very familiar prayer and sentiment.

Kate Bluett's avatar

Thank you so much!

Kathryn's avatar

Amazing and convicting!

Megan T's avatar

Kate, this one is one I will return to regularly. Thank you for these words. They give voice to a deep, wordless prayer within me!

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Your poems are truly wonderful, an instrument of the Holy Ghost for sure. Thank you!!