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Rachel Lynne Sakashita's avatar

"Nearsighted, squinting and then leaning in

to see you clearly while the veil is thin,

I cannot shield you from the death you chose,

but for a moment, I can hold you close."

Those lines nearly brought me to tears. How beautiful.

I'm amazed at how you choose words that don't normally fit together--"Creation's every inch writhes," "tried in flame by vespers," "untouched by birth," to name a few --and make music out of them. I feel blessed to have read this poem this morning!!

Leah | Blessed Endurance's avatar

How…do you manage this beauty? Again and again? This is rich and true.

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