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Rachel Lynne Sakashita's avatar

"Nearsighted, squinting and then leaning in

to see you clearly while the veil is thin,

I cannot shield you from the death you chose,

but for a moment, I can hold you close."

Those lines nearly brought me to tears. How beautiful.

I'm amazed at how you choose words that don't normally fit together--"Creation's every inch writhes," "tried in flame by vespers," "untouched by birth," to name a few --and make music out of them. I feel blessed to have read this poem this morning!!

Kate Bluett's avatar

Thank you so much!

Leah | Blessed Endurance's avatar

How…do you manage this beauty? Again and again? This is rich and true.

Kate Bluett's avatar

Thank you so much! This one came out of that phrase "All flesh shall see the salvation of God" and realizing that maybe, possibly, that meant my flesh, too.

Leah | Blessed Endurance's avatar

Yes! And mine too. I love the hours of prayer stanza. Thank you for sharing your gift with us!

Kate Bluett's avatar

You're very welcome!

Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

“See, birth and dying are not separate works,

and in your advent, Lord, Good Friday lurks.”

I love it when Good Friday comes into Christmas in poetry.

The hours of prayer stanza gives me lovely shivers.

“You who command the cleanliness of space

need not set foot upon this filthy earth”

I love this image.

And the nearsighted moment in the final stanza: “Nearsighted, squinting and then leaning in

to see you clearly while the veil is thin,”

The final couplet is perfect.

Kate Bluett's avatar

Thank you so much! The Good Friday line was actually a surprise, so I'm glad it worked!

Abigail's avatar

I loved that line too

Matt Garland's avatar

I just read the Divine Comedy and It got me wondering about the resurrection of the flesh. I had though it was a doctrine that showed creation redeemed. But if we could all be balls of light in heaven, why was that important? So this poem gives me one answer, that creation redeemed is part of the miracle of incarnation, the human-being-close-to-God part.

Kate Bluett's avatar

Yes! Creation in all its frail mortality will be redeemed!